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HeyWhatsTheDeal: Local Deals
Zero Bid Finder for eBay USAHeyWhatsTheDeal: Local Deals
Exclusive local deals near you
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Local Deals”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Exclusive local deals near you”
Has a subtitle
“The ultimate money saving app”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “local”, “deals”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 132 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 281 characters.
1,170 characters.
Enough substance
2,087 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.56 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
18 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 49 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 716 days ago.
184 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Big fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
30 MB.
Reasonable download size
35 MB.