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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
DuoSwim: Swim Workout App
FORM Swim25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Swim Workout App”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Swim Training & Tracking”
Has a subtitle
“A Game-Changing Way to Swim”
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “swim”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “swim”.
First paragraph is 134 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 186 characters.
1,754 characters.
Enough substance
2,470 characters.
18 bullet lines, 21 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
71 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,489 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 17 days ago.
416 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “• Bug fixes and performance optimizations”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
97 MB.
Reasonable download size
219 MB.