Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
World War 2: Army FPS Shooter
Frontline Gun Shooting Games
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Army FPS Shooter”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Mobile Shooter”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Frontline Gun Shooting Games”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 227 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 25 characters.
3,175 characters.
Enough substance
2,632 characters.
6 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
19 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.61 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.32 average.
7,332 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,516 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and optimisation”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Tech Update”
17 languages.
Localised listing
11 languages.
883 MB.
Reasonable download size
1192 MB.