Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Politics and War
President Simulator: Leader16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Leader”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Create your own country”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 285 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 53 characters.
1,855 characters.
Enough substance
910 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.53 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.34 average.
1,959 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
105 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 338 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 104 days ago.
Generic notes: “Code optimization”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor bugs fixed.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
40 MB.
Reasonable download size
120 MB.