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FleetNet Mobile App14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“Business”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 312 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 331 characters.
1,025 characters.
Enough substance
2,430 characters.
5 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.20 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.80 average.
10 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 116 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 448 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Added sub‑unit detail visibility - Bug Fixes”
Release notes say something
483 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
320 MB.
Reasonable download size
33 MB.