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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Zen Color - Color By Number
My Cute Friends: Coloring BookZen Color - Color By Number
Relaxing Adult Coloring Book
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Color By Number”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Coloring Book”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Relaxing Adult Coloring Book”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 314 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 48 characters.
3,230 characters.
Enough substance
2,959 characters.
13 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 23 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.81 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.81 average.
398,145 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,933 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 15 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 7 days ago.
141 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Special event scheduled. Minor improvements.”
25 languages.
Localised listing
9 languages.
244 MB.
Reasonable download size
262 MB.