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Package tracker: Parcels Hub
Packages - Track Your Parcels28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Parcels Hub”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Track Your Parcels”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 133 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 100 characters.
2,290 characters.
Enough substance
3,947 characters.
5 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.49 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
1,299 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
13,557 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 7 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 361 days ago.
206 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “* Fix for UI display issue on iPhone Air”
10 languages.
Localised listing
16 languages.
30 MB.
Reasonable download size
45 MB.