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Second Cup Egypt
Mahmoud ElFar Market16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Amazing shopping experience!”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 40 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 247 characters.
353 characters.
Enough substance
247 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.23 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.59 average.
22 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
17 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 115 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “New in-app icons and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fix and performance enhnacment”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
51 MB.
Reasonable download size
152 MB.