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Jollibee - Order & Rewards
85C Bakery CafeJollibee - Order & Rewards
Pickup, Delivery & Rewards
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Order & Rewards”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Pickup, Delivery & Rewards”
Has a subtitle
“Sweeten Your Life!”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “rewards”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 147 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 118 characters.
1,465 characters.
Enough substance
540 characters.
7 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.87 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.74 average.
40,410 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
977 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 17 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 254 days ago.
Generic notes: “General bug fixes and enhancements”
Release notes say something
66 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
94 MB.
Reasonable download size
117 MB.