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Fight The Stroke Foundation
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Seizure First Aid”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 138 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 177 characters.
1,929 characters.
Enough substance
1,000 characters.
7 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.33 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.71 average.
6 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
17 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 75 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 827 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes and performance improvements.”
Release notes say something
1095 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
22 languages.
48 MB.
Reasonable download size
60 MB.