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Aura: Seizure First Aid
Epipal: Seizure Alerts & LogEpipal: Seizure Alerts & Log
Detect Seizures. Alert Family.
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Seizure First Aid”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Seizure Alerts & Log”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Detect Seizures. Alert Family.”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “seizures”, “alert”.
First paragraph is 138 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 217 characters.
1,929 characters.
Enough substance
3,212 characters.
7 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.33 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.37 average.
6 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
142 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 75 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 111 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes and performance improvements.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor improvements and bug fixes.”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
48 MB.
Reasonable download size
85 MB.