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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
BidFTA Mobile App
OLA - Online Auction17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Auction”.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The Official BidFTA Mobile App”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “bidfta”, “mobile”, “app”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 175 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 465 characters.
175 characters.
Enough substance
912 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
2.23 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
90 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9,642 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 72 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 19 days ago.
Generic notes: “Just squashing some bugs”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Improved Delivery methods screen.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
65 MB.
Reasonable download size
42 MB.