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mobiquity Pay
Orokii app13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“making payments efficient”
Has a subtitle
“Orokii”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
6/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “orokii”.
First paragraph is 16 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 37 characters.
1,680 characters.
Enough substance
2,227 characters.
11 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 249 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 296 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and security fixes.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes.”
3 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
189 MB.
Reasonable download size
199 MB.