Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Hearty App: Everyday Bonding
Good Inside: Parenting28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Everyday Bonding”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Parenting”.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fun Ideas for Parents”
Has a subtitle
“24/7 Parenting Support”
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “parenting”.
First paragraph is 66 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 271 characters.
664 characters.
Enough substance
3,410 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.71 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.93 average.
2,921 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
13,740 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 190 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes & improvements”
Release notes say something
120 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
107 MB.
Reasonable download size
131 MB.