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Golf Scorecard: the Simplest
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The ultimate golf scorecard
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “the Simplest”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Golf Scorecard”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“The ultimate golf scorecard”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “golf”, “scorecard”.
First paragraph is 381 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 201 characters.
381 characters.
Enough substance
1,861 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.46 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.80 average.
26 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
437 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1943 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 52 days ago.
No release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor improvements and fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
45 MB.
Reasonable download size
75 MB.