Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Volt Master”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Merge Puzzle”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Puzzle”
Has a subtitle
“3D brain training puzzle game”
6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “puzzle”.
First paragraph is 43 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 70 characters.
1,130 characters.
Enough substance
410 characters.
11 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.33 average.
13 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
6 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 92 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 697 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Optimize in-game - Fix each problem - Game Balancing Fix”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed bugs”
8 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
232 MB.
Reasonable download size
204 MB.