Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
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NCPMobile: Shopping RewardsNCPMobile: Shopping Rewards
Shop, Scan & Get Rewarded!
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Shopping Rewards”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“#1 Savings App”
Has a subtitle
“Shop, Scan & Get Rewarded!”
14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 135 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 176 characters.
881 characters.
Enough substance
809 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.47 average.
31,357 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
15,889 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 60 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 30 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bugfixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and optimizations.”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
45 MB.
Reasonable download size
94 MB.