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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Gun Simulator - Shake to shoot
Gun Sounds on ShakeGun Simulator - Shake to shoot
Use your phone like a gun
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shake to shoot”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Use your phone like a gun”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “gun”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 218 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 29 characters.
452 characters.
Enough substance
1,244 characters.
6 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.59 average.
23,037 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10,166 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 83 days ago.
80 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Improved dark, tinted icons. - Button visibility bug fixes and text…”
1 language.
Localised listing
33 languages.
31 MB.
Reasonable download size
270 MB.