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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Gun Simulator - Shake to shoot
Space Falcon Reloaded Shoot'emGun Simulator - Shake to shoot
Use your phone like a gun
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shake to shoot”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Use your phone like a gun”
Has a subtitle
“Galaxy shaking space shooter.”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “gun”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “space”.
First paragraph is 218 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 55 characters.
452 characters.
Enough substance
1,702 characters.
6 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.00 average.
23,037 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
6 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2223 days ago.
80 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes for latest iPhones.”
1 language.
Localised listing
33 languages.
31 MB.
Reasonable download size
94 MB.