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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Gun Simulator - Shake to shoot
shake smartGun Simulator - Shake to shoot
Use your phone like a gun
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shake to shoot”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Use your phone like a gun”
Has a subtitle
“your loyalty deserves a reward”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “gun”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 218 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 32 characters.
452 characters.
Enough substance
782 characters.
6 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.48 average.
23,037 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
196 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 39 days ago.
80 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes and enhancements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
31 MB.
Reasonable download size
114 MB.