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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Suzerain
Politics and War8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Create your own country”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 403 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 285 characters.
3,922 characters.
Enough substance
1,855 characters.
4 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.64 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.53 average.
1,367 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,959 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 35 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 338 days ago.
365 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Code optimization”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
848 MB.
Reasonable download size
40 MB.