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Freebie Invoice Maker
Invoice Maker: Simple Generate21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Simple Generate”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
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Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 333 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 36 characters.
3,372 characters.
Enough substance
2,224 characters.
15 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.88 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.68 average.
11,378 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
194 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 475 days ago.
206 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “improved functionality and critical fixes”
14 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
87 MB.
Reasonable download size
52 MB.