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ServerLife - Tip TrackerServerLife - Tip Tracker
Start tracking your income!
5/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Tip Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Don't waste your money”
Has a subtitle
“Start tracking your income!”
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 43 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 50 characters.
776 characters.
Enough substance
3,040 characters.
2 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
40 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
3.65 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.82 average.
2,465 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9,793 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 829 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 117 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and huge app improvements”
Release notes say something
335 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
133 MB.
Reasonable download size
60 MB.