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Motus - Business Mileage Log13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Business Mileage Log”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Manage your schedule”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 173 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 69 characters.
892 characters.
Enough substance
1,931 characters.
7 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
15 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.51 average.
3,918 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,688 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 29 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 23 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes and Security patches”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “This version contains minor bug fixes and performance improvements. We…”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
64 MB.
Reasonable download size
109 MB.