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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Diaspora Space
Melon: Sandbox14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Sandbox”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 160 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 41 characters.
224 characters.
Enough substance
712 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.47 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
139,960 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 892 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
Generic notes: “Project Upgraded”
Release notes say something
488 characters of release notes.
8 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
52 MB.
Reasonable download size
533 MB.