Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Diaspora Space
People Jam: Seat Puzzle14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Seat Puzzle”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 160 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 49 characters.
224 characters.
Enough substance
1,313 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.60 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,612 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 892 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 24 days ago.
Generic notes: “Project Upgraded”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Change levels, update SDK, change main interface scene”
8 languages.
Localised listing
14 languages.
52 MB.
Reasonable download size
179 MB.