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Mahmoud ElFar Market
Oscar Grand Stores20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Amazing shopping experience!”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 247 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 62 characters.
247 characters.
Enough substance
1,576 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
2.59 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.60 average.
17 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fix and performance enhnacment”
Release notes say something
65 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
152 MB.
Reasonable download size
65 MB.