Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Fitness Club Tycoon-Idle Game
Idle Nightclub Tycoon: ManagerIdle Nightclub Tycoon: Manager
VIP party, DJ & club simulator
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Idle Game”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Manager”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Gym Workout Simulator”
Has a subtitle
“VIP party, DJ & club simulator”
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 65 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 260 characters.
3,103 characters.
Enough substance
3,175 characters.
10 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.90 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.85 average.
9,594 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,236 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 176 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “Optimized game experience”
Release notes say something
211 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
11 languages.
419 MB.
Reasonable download size
489 MB.