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Docket® - Immunization Records
Official Immunization Records
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Immunization Records”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Medical”
Has a subtitle
“Official Immunization Records”
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “immunization”, “records”.
First paragraph is 182 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 606 characters.
1,213 characters.
Enough substance
1,342 characters.
7 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.87 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.70 average.
9,463 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
44,536 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 7 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 5 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor improvements”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
37 MB.
Reasonable download size
88 MB.