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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Ragdoll Fall: Break the Bones!
Ragdoll Breaking Bones GameRagdoll Fall: Break the Bones!
Fall down in the ragdoll game!
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Break the Bones!”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fall down in the ragdoll game!”
Has a subtitle
“Broken bones - physics games”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “fall”, “ragdoll”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “bones”, “games”.
First paragraph is 200 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 328 characters.
1,082 characters.
Enough substance
328 characters.
5 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
3.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
525 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 379 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 670 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and minor improvements.”
Release notes say something
107 characters of release notes.
18 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
374 MB.
Reasonable download size
213 MB.