Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Ragdoll Fall: Break the Bones!
Break Ragdoll: Destroy BoneRagdoll Fall: Break the Bones!
Fall down in the ragdoll game!
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Break the Bones!”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Destroy Bone”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fall down in the ragdoll game!”
Has a subtitle
“Best Stress Relief Bones Break”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “fall”, “ragdoll”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “bones”, “break”.
First paragraph is 200 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 77 characters.
1,082 characters.
Enough substance
1,340 characters.
5 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
3.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.95 average.
525 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
64 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 379 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 833 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and minor improvements.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “New levels Added Sounds Improve Minor Bugs Fixes”
18 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
374 MB.
Reasonable download size
193 MB.