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Ragdoll Games: Breaking Bones
Ragdoll Break Stress Relief
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Break the Bones!”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Breaking Bones”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fall down in the ragdoll game!”
Has a subtitle
“Ragdoll Break Stress Relief”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “fall”, “ragdoll”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “ragdoll”.
First paragraph is 200 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 31 characters.
1,082 characters.
Enough substance
1,749 characters.
5 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
3.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
525 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
968 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 379 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and minor improvements.”
Release notes say something
69 characters of release notes.
18 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
374 MB.
Reasonable download size
250 MB.