Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
OLA - Online Auction
BidFTA Mobile App20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Online Auction”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 465 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 175 characters.
912 characters.
Enough substance
175 characters.
7 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.23 average.
9,642 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
90 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 19 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 72 days ago.
Generic notes: “Improved Delivery methods screen.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Just squashing some bugs”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
42 MB.
Reasonable download size
65 MB.