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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Church Funnels
Planning Center Links14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Church Funnels”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “church”, “funnels”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 155 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 219 characters.
995 characters.
Enough substance
3,177 characters.
3 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
20 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.85 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
13 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 155 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 170 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes & performance Improvements”
Release notes say something
230 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
311 MB.
Reasonable download size
29 MB.