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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Wetzel's Pretzels
PLAYFUL REWARDS: Earn Rewards17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Earn Rewards”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Earn Rewards. Order Online.”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 256 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 78 characters.
1,162 characters.
Enough substance
2,201 characters.
6 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 23 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
7,104 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
121,765 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 177 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “• Bug fixes & other improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “We did some bug fixing, user experience enhancing, and more!”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
72 MB.
Reasonable download size
139 MB.