Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
My Liberty App
Goldie: Appointment Scheduler14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Appointment Scheduler”.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Self Care”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 99 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 321 characters.
1,143 characters.
Enough substance
3,934 characters.
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
23 bullet lines, 34 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.84 average.
20,379 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
12,857 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 15 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
215 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
245 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
135 MB.
Reasonable download size
289 MB.