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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Immortal Awakening
Dragon Storm Fantasy18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Still Classic, Beyond Immortal”
Has a subtitle
“Dual-Form Dragon Battle Game”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “immortal”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “dragon”.
First paragraph is 48 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 69 characters.
1,606 characters.
Enough substance
3,099 characters.
18 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
1,434 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9,110 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 65 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
Generic notes: “-Bugs fixed”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed known login issues.”
7 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
1322 MB.
Reasonable download size
600 MB.