Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Race Master”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Extreme Race”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 356 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 139 characters.
1,590 characters.
Enough substance
2,119 characters.
4 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.66 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.43 average.
5,856 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,694 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 152 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 384 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fix bugs and improve game quality”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
32 languages.
309 MB.
Reasonable download size
198 MB.