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Jeff Galloway Run Walk Run
Run With Hal26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Couch to 5K to Marathon”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 445 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 300 characters.
3,965 characters.
Enough substance
819 characters.
21 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.68 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
200 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,848 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 44 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 187 days ago.
359 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
276 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
322 MB.
Reasonable download size
47 MB.