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El Abd Patisserie
Breadfast: Groceries And More17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Groceries And More”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Food & Drink”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 316 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 152 characters.
1,029 characters.
Enough substance
1,028 characters.
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.84 average.
12 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9,929 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 53 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 6 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes New Feature”
Release notes say something
125 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
103 MB.
Reasonable download size
398 MB.