Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
El Abd Patisserie
Mahmoud ElFar MarketOnly El Abd Patisserie
Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Food & Drink”
Has a subtitle
“Amazing shopping experience!”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 316 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 247 characters.
1,029 characters.
Enough substance
247 characters.
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.59 average.
12 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
17 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 53 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes New Feature”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fix and performance enhnacment”
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
103 MB.
Reasonable download size
152 MB.