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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
El Abd Patisserie
Buffalo Burger17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Food & Drink”
Has a subtitle
“The Real Thing”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 316 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 182 characters.
1,029 characters.
Enough substance
696 characters.
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.95 average.
12 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
20 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 53 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 23 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes New Feature”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
103 MB.
Reasonable download size
52 MB.