Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Roterin
Rentcars: Car rental7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Car rental”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Roteiros de Viagem”
Has a subtitle
“Rent a car wherever you are”
18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “car”.
First paragraph is 153 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 51 characters.
1,215 characters.
Enough substance
2,687 characters.
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
18 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.94 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.61 average.
17 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
830 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 17 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and stability improvements”
Release notes say something
198 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
7 languages.
167 MB.
Reasonable download size
156 MB.