Two listings. One rope.
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Awakened Way
Global Coherence12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Suzanne Giesemann”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 224 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 21 characters.
2,495 characters.
Enough substance
763 characters.
11 bullet lines, 20 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.72 average.
462 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
89 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 39 days ago.
Generic notes: “App Updates/Fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “UI Improvements and Enhancements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
45 MB.
Reasonable download size
174 MB.