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Awakened Way
Expand: Beyond Meditation12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Beyond Meditation”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Suzanne Giesemann”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 224 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 178 characters.
2,495 characters.
Enough substance
2,230 characters.
11 bullet lines, 20 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.06 average.
462 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
297 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
Generic notes: “App Updates/Fixes”
Release notes say something
1164 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
45 MB.
Reasonable download size
67 MB.