Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
BePresent: Screen Time Control
Block apps, focus & rewards
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Screen Time Control”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Ditch Distractions”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Block apps, focus & rewards”
Has a subtitle
“Make your phone a tool again”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 237 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 323 characters.
3,994 characters.
Enough substance
3,107 characters.
14 bullet lines, 29 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.94 average.
65,768 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
55,896 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
72 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Thank you for updating the Brick app! We've updated our iOS app with b…”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
105 MB.
Reasonable download size
47 MB.