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Epipal: Seizure Alerts & Log
Seizure Alert - My Medic WatchEpipal: Seizure Alerts & Log
Detect Seizures. Alert Family.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Seizure Alerts & Log”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “My Medic Watch”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Detect Seizures. Alert Family.”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “seizures”, “alert”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 217 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 322 characters.
3,212 characters.
Enough substance
3,660 characters.
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
iPhone only, nothing to add.
4.37 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.41 average.
142 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
22 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 111 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- User interface improvements - Performance enhancements”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
85 MB.
Reasonable download size
47 MB.