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Epipal: Seizure Alerts & Log
Epilepsy JournalEpipal: Seizure Alerts & Log
Detect Seizures. Alert Family.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Seizure Alerts & Log”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Detect Seizures. Alert Family.”
Has a subtitle
“Epilepsy Management App”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “seizures”, “alert”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “epilepsy”.
First paragraph is 217 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 469 characters.
3,212 characters.
Enough substance
3,434 characters.
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.37 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.45 average.
142 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
20 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 111 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 29 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
259 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
23 languages.
85 MB.
Reasonable download size
45 MB.