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Epipal: Seizure Alerts & Log
EpiWatch - Seizure MonitorEpiWatch - Seizure Monitor
FDA-Cleared Seizure Monitor
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Seizure Alerts & Log”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Seizure Monitor”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Detect Seizures. Alert Family.”
Has a subtitle
“FDA-Cleared Seizure Monitor”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “seizures”, “alert”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “seizure”, “monitor”.
First paragraph is 217 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 74 characters.
3,212 characters.
Enough substance
3,905 characters.
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
iPhone only, nothing to add.
4.37 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.17 average.
142 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
132 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 111 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
361 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
85 MB.
Reasonable download size
92 MB.