Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Dollar Tree
Hobby Lobby11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 389 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 182 characters.
1,293 characters.
Enough substance
951 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
3.18 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.96 average.
475 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,883 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 24 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 232 days ago.
Generic notes: “• Bug Fixes • Performance Enhancements • UI Improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “updated to support newer devices optimize bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
83 MB.
Reasonable download size
47 MB.